tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3352670764616215669.post4433768422092492659..comments2023-06-11T20:17:42.694+05:30Comments on Pigeonheadophobia: Lotus Stem Part 5Pigeonheadophobiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07660592795527333820noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3352670764616215669.post-32339381875914412952012-05-30T15:49:04.377+05:302012-05-30T15:49:04.377+05:30Thanks! :)
Will try and change the ending. Maybe ...Thanks! :)<br /><br />Will try and change the ending. Maybe extend it a little.Pigeonheadophobiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07660592795527333820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3352670764616215669.post-68750973579367411072012-05-28T21:15:26.128+05:302012-05-28T21:15:26.128+05:30Ok.Read the complete thing.Hmmm....Ok.Read the complete thing.Hmmm....Rahulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01978139164983441198noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3352670764616215669.post-58832689096768940042012-05-28T20:33:11.896+05:302012-05-28T20:33:11.896+05:30Okay, so here's the thing. Very well written, ...Okay, so here's the thing. Very well written, eerie, sublime and attractive. But... a the ending is a bit flat. Only a teeny bit. You could have worked more on the climax. But as I said, the aura is uncanny! Cheers!Amateur At Thishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07789530066495979033noreply@blogger.com